3rd Quarter Submission Revisions

For my revisions to my 3rd quarter submission, I didn't change much about my title page. I received some good feedback on it, but I decided to change the color of one of the subheadings. The yellow made it stand out and gave the cover a vibrant and spring time look.

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I got really good feedback on my table of contents, so I decided not to change it too much. I conducted a third photo shoot, so I decided to add one of the pictures from that to my table of contents. I also moved some of the page numbers to make sure they were in the right spot on the picture.

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For my article, I decided to change the entire layout. Originally, my partner and I had agreed that our articles should follow a very similar layout as that would ensure unity between the issues. Upon further research, we found that many magazines had articles within each issue that were formatted differently. For our magazine, this worked to differential between my craft article and her cooking article Throughout issues we decided that each different type of article would follow a slightly different format. This differentiates between the different types of articles in our magazine.

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