3rd Quarter Submission Feedback

I didn't get too much feedback on my project. Mr. Elsbree suggested that I move some of my subtitles up so that they would be directly over the white background rather than being over both the white background and the wood table. I also noticed that when you saw my cover on my blog, it appeared to be over saturated. I will definitely look into that. I was also questioned about the size of my pictures on the second page of my article. The sizing of the stacked pictures were different, which is not very conventional. My partner had also incorporated this technique into her article so we both made the decision to make the sizes of the pictures more similar. When I looked back at my midterm submission, I noticed that I had included a pull-out quote. I did not intentionally leave this out of my revision so I would like to add one back in before submitting my final submission. I got really good feedback on my table of contents, but I feel that it doesn't really match with my magazine. To remedy this I am planning on streamlining the color scheme more to give the magazine a more cohesive feeling.