Revision of Article

For my article, I decided to take out some pieces and conduct the interview with a different person. After looking into articles that were of a similar topic as mine, I decided that I should just interview someone who would do the craft with me and guide me on how to do it. I decided on Ella because she knew how to make the distressed mason jars and had all of the materials. On the first page of the article, I added a large picture of her holding the jars as well as a large title and by-line. This really helped to make the page look more professional and more similar to the other articles I found that were of a similar genre. I also added more pictures to the article and moved the materials to the second page to ensure unity between my partners layout and my layout. Overall, I didn't change much of the writing, only the interview. I also decided to completely change the interview template. Instead of asking about the arts, I focused more on how to create the project and any tips and tricks. I found that this was much more common in magazines of a similar genre to mine.




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